Should I go into you
your waves
your tide
your ship wrecks
your grit
or
Should I sit on the beach
in a comfortable chair
and pretend
I'v been there
Should I be a tourist
cover my breasts
with shells and
buy trinkets
that emmulate you
or
Should I go into your cold
wear your foam
scrape your salt
off of me
when you evaporate
Will I become
flooded,
soggy,
awashed,
Will I be
drenched
saturated
baptized
renewed
or
Will I dissolve
and drown
and atomize
the ethers
Should I .....
copyright Rozanna Landavazo 2011
yes - get in there woman! :-)
ReplyDeleteExcellent question for the sea or for me. As usual, bold, edgy, and sensual.
ReplyDeleteOh so many choices. AS USUAL amazing.
ReplyDeleteYour poetry is so deep, it really makes me think. You've got talent, that's a fact. Thanks and keep 'em comin'!
ReplyDeleteDear Rozanna:
ReplyDeleteExtrañaba tus posts pero has regresado con la enorme fuerza marina, con la sutileza del la espuma y el alma de poeta que te caracteriza.
Hersomos este poema.
Abrazos.
From Maria:
ReplyDeleteDear Rozanna:
It was surprising your posts but you have returned with the enormous marine force, with the delicacy of the froth and the poet's soul that characterizes you.
Hersomos this poem.
Hugs.
Glen: Splash!
ReplyDeleteMichael: Thank you! Appreciate your comments
Barbara: I know, choices, choices.
Rachelle: Ah, you are so kind.
Maria: Poet's soul, from one to another.
Rozanna, this poem speaks to me so much!!
ReplyDeleteYou have a sensitive soul that peeks through every word...
Nazia, I am honored to have you read my poetry. Thank you and I hope you are well.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poetry here, Rozanna. Such depth in the simple words, all the better for the images they evoke.
ReplyDeleteThank you Elisabeth. I appreciate your attention to my poetry.
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