Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Conductor

Willow tree hair swoons
Cherry tree pinks undulate
Wind orchestrates all

2010 Rozanna Landavazo

7 comments:

  1. like this. I am continually amazed at the discipline it must take to stay within the rules and yet say something that grabs. impressive.

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  2. Thank you, I love writing these. Maybe I'll try a Limerick someday!

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  3. They say that a limerick must rhyme,
    I think poems with rules are a crime
    I try and I try
    To be a poetry guy
    And I fail at it time after time

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  4. Okay, whoa. I loved your recent poems Rose, but watch out. Looks like there's a new guy in town. I would keep my eye on Michael. Didn't know he had a bent toward poetry. I'm kind of impressed by his limerick here. Not sure you should allow him to post his stuff on your blog, he's apt to steal the show. Teasing, your poems are pretty awesome, but have to say.... watch him. ;o)

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  5. Whoops! That last comment was from me, Rachelle, not Ashley. I guess she forgot to sign out again. Sorry!

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  6. That is a good limerick! I think we got a poet born here! it's ok, I like the name Ashley too.

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