She hit him
with her vehicle mouth
flattened him with
semi-truck
logic
a sorry pancake
all syrupy and squished
she ate him
She just got mad
he forgot to agree
so
she talked him
out-debated him
lost him
No good-bye
no look back
no:
beg your pardon
did I misunderstand
let's talk
Left him
to wander
how he ever
got there.....
2010 Rozanna Landavazo
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I don't read much poetry...I should. I like this one. Thanks for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your poetry. Very descriptive! I read Hit and Run many times. And, I will have to talk with you about the Openings blog sometime.
ReplyDeleteBarb M
Okay, in the vein of Duality. I've always loved this stuff. I'm surprised I get it, always have been. You watch, mark my word...
ReplyDeleteI appreciate these comments by everyone. Barb M. I would be glad to talk about Openings and thank you for loving my poetry. Rozanna
ReplyDeleteHola Rozanna:
ReplyDeleteMe ha gustado mucho este poema, leerte es muy enriquecedor para mí.
Te mando un abrazo.
Okay, honesty here... I love it, but don't always "get it" like Michael claims to do. But, it doesn't take a genius to know that you have a gift where poetry is concerned. Rozanna, you need to seek publication. You are THAT good. You ARE.
ReplyDeleteGracias Maria, you do me honor to tell me my poetry "enriches" you, a hug to you also.
ReplyDeleteRachelle, I am going to seek, want to have a good solid book of poems but I suppose I could start with 1 eh? Thank you again for your compliments.
I'm not sure how many poems you've posted on this blog, but they have all amazed me. Just keep writing, girl. You've got IT.
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